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Disciplinary Action by Onley James

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tab_reads's review against another edition

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emotional fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated

5.0


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edgybutfemme's review

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emotional fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5

🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️4 / 5
This features many explicit scenes with lots of detailed language. This book is heavier on the spice, but the plot is still there and doing something interesting. Also, it's probably at least a little kinky.
The Smut / Kinks include: DADDY KINK (all caps because my god does it come up multiple times a page), headmaster / student (which is just to the left of teacher/student), dom / sub power dynamics, spanking / pain play, sugar daddy / caretaking, praise kink, degradation, orgasm denial / chastity play, sex in public & So Much Dirty Talk. So much of this book was smut I may have missed something, but honestly the main kinks made it into pretty much every scene.

"Meghan," you might say, "I see that list of kinks and so many are hits for you! Why isn't this book rated higher?" I hear you. The thing is, this is a pretty good book! I will probably read other things by this author to see if they are more my vibe. The thing is: I don't mind Daddy kink. I don't go out of my way to avoid it and it tends to be packaged with a lot of other things I'm super into so I tend to read it a lot. However, this book Daddy kink is the Main Kink (tm). Instead of Sir or Master, Gideon's title is exclusively Daddy so it is used like 3-7ish times every page during sex scenes. This is fine! If it's your kink, you will love this book! However, I picked this up expecting it to go harder on the teacher/student vibes and honestly that isn't the main focus at all. They have sex at the school a few times, but it was rarely during the pre-built in daily detention that is established to be happening but is almost never on screen. They have sex way more at home and it falls much heavier on the caretaking / daddy kink. Totally fine, but not what I was here for.

Okay, some things I did like though:
- The plot was weirdly compelling, and I'm really not sure how they fit so much plot in considering like every other scene was smut?? I think this book feels so fast paced because we are bouncing back and forth between Intense Smut scene and Intense Plot scene with very little down beat.
- I have never come across a more absolutely devastatingly filthy amount of dirty talk from the dom. Gideon talks a lot during the sex scenes and honestly I wasn't mad about it.
- It's kind of funny, but this really does go very hard on making a taboo romance aggressively not taboo. Gideon is only his headmaster for 6 weeks, Cal is 19 years old, and they had sex before Gideon realized he was going to be Cal's temporary headmaster.
- The backstories for each of the characters were complex and the trauma they were both carrying made sense and caused understandable obstacles for them, which I'm not always expecting in a smut novel. It's surprisingly emotional!
- The way the plot resolved was very satisfying, both for the romance and for the overarching plot of preventing Cal from being expelled for bullshit reasons and uncovering a cheating/rich people paying for spots in top schools scandal. I didn't expect the places it went and weirdly integrated itself well between.

TLDR
Anyway, if you are looking for "taboo" romance that is actually perfectly unproblematic with a lot of Daddy Kink smut and some headmaster/student flavoring, this is the book for you. If you really wanted the student/teacher stuff only and/or you don't want too much plot in your erotica, you'd probably be better off skipping this one.

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haloblues's review against another edition

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3.5

Teacher/student isn't particularly my thing most of the time, but I enjoyed this enough to read it the entire way through, so props!

Details: Alternating POVs, third-person, past tense
Favourite character: Cal
Happy ending?: Yes
Other content warnings: Unsafe BDSM (in the past and not between the MCs, but discussion of a past partner ignoring safewords and another using their Dom/sub relationship as a way to abuse them)

Favourite quotes:
Roger, on the other hand, had probably been on the board since God himself was a boy. The man looked like he'd died a hundred years ago and somebody had forgotten to remind him to lie down.


Cal shook his head vehemently. "I didn't know Grant or your father, but I know you. You check in with me all the time. You would never ignore my safeword. You punish me because I like it. You were willing to pay me and let me walk away the night we met. You offered to take care of me financially until I finish college without asking for anything in return. Your father and Grant didn't get off on inflicting pain, they got off on the power. They got off on making somebody bend to their will. Abuse is about creating a power imbalance. BDSM is about a power exchange."

Gideon couldn't help his look of surprise. "Where did you learn that?"

"I read up on it while I was in the hospital, after you said I could live with you. I wanted to make sure I was doing it right." Gideon swallowed hard past the lump in his throat, but Cal wasn't done talking. "You would never make me sleep on the floor, and you even let Alexa sleep right in bed with us. Besides, I like when you take care of me. I like having somebody make decisions for me when we're home. I like pleasing you. I love your punishments. When you're in charge, the rest of the world just falls away. I'm not submitting to you because I love you. I love you because submitting to you makes my head quiet."


Leo blinked. "Melody? Holy shit." Gideon gave the girl an awkward hug. "I haven't seen you since you and JD got engaged..." He trailed off. "Wait." He looked at Pam and then back at Melody. "Did you and JD get a divorce?"

"No, we just picked up another wife," she said, like she was telling him she'd popped over to the corner store to pick up eggs or a gallon of milk.


Some ridiculous part of him thought maybe she was a vampire and this was a trap. She had that demeanor - cunning, cruel, calculating. Beautiful in the way that icicles were beautiful. Her silver hair was swept into a complicated pile with crystal pins, and her eyes were a beautiful ice blue. She could have easily passed for a woman half her age if not for the shrewdness of her gaze.

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bergha1998's review against another edition

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dark emotional funny hopeful reflective sad medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.25

On paper this book seems really interesting, and I typically love Onley James’s writing. However, this one just wasn’t quite what I thought it would be or wanted. I think the characters were a bit underdeveloped, they fell in love too fast, & some of the plot points had no foreshadowing so they felt out of left field. The spice was very good though. 

Dark Romance, Daddy Kink, Age Gap, 4 🔥

“It sucks loving somebody whose love comes with conditions.”

“‘Do you think you could love me forever?’ ‘Sometimes, it seems as if I have and just didn’t know it.’”

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jessie_h's review against another edition

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challenging emotional hopeful reflective fast-paced

3.75


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bgrrrl's review against another edition

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emotional mysterious sad tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

4.25

Deliciously steamy read that I devoured in one evening. Gideon and Callum are a perfect daddy/boy match. The story had a bit of mystery/suspense that kept me intrigued until the end and lots of heartfelt emotions in between. This was my first book by this author and I look forward to checking out her other titles!

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sabinehunter's review against another edition

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emotional funny medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0


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ruthiedr89's review against another edition

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challenging dark emotional sad tense fast-paced

3.0


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book_lover56's review against another edition

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dark sad tense fast-paced

5.0


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roxyc's review against another edition

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emotional lighthearted medium-paced

4.0


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