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Disciplinary Action by Onley James

esraa5055's review against another edition

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3.0

It’s what it’s smut with a little bit of plot

nsgold's review

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funny lighthearted medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.75

bookworm_panda's review against another edition

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5.0

ETA 12/8/21 - YESSSS I'm starting the audio of this amazing, sexy, wonderful story.

OK the audio is AMAZING. 6 stars for the audio, I'm surprised my phone didn't melt lol



I NEED IT TO BE MARCH NOW! So I can get the rest of this story, of course!

This entire thing is the definitely of teaser LOL, and it definitely leaves you wanting more. This was part of an instafreebie giveaway at the start of the new year, and the author plans on releasing the entire book in March (last I heard it was still March, at least)

Can't wait!

ETA 4/18/20 - I don't know if the full story will show up as a separate book or not, so I'm just adding my review here for now. OMG I just finished the full edition of this book and it's WONDERFUL!

Callum is a 19 year old high school student who's had to resort to a night of sex work to make some money. His client is Gideon - but what he doesn't know is that Gideon is also the temporary new head master at Callum's school. When they meet at school, Callum's original idea is one of blackmail. But as the two continue their physical relationship, all the feels come out to play.

I LOVED these two together! CRAZY hot chemistry, great verbal banter back and forth, and I just love how wonderful Gideon was to Cal. This is my favorite type of daddy kink - older man caring for the younger man and giving him a good, secure space for him to grow and flourish and become his own person, while still needing his Daddy. I love that Gideon was able to provide for Cal and that also allowed Gideon to heal from his own past and start moving forward as well. These two were just so perfect for each other!

I love all the attention to detail with Cal's diabetes and also the conflict that comes up later in the story. There are some crazy hot scenes in here, plot and drama, and all the feels! AH that ending!

Just loved it. Everything from this author is a 5 star read. I can't wait for what she has next (Jackson's story, PLEASE!)

I received an arc in exchange for an honest review.

ohsirmeli's review against another edition

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5.0

Great

Was a very very very good book. I was on a roller coaster of emotions I was getting so sad I wanted to cry a lot. I like the treatment too, and was just so bad crap. What’s his name? I just finished it what in the world oh my goodness I really can’t remember his name, the 19-year-old. Yeah I feel bad for him a lot of the time I also kept thinking what it would’ve been like if Grant was alive and Gordon just left him it was good. He got me really thinking though.

vinireadsbooks's review against another edition

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3.0

this was fun!! kind of gave me his boy next door vibes, which i enjoyed!! definitely better than the last onley james book i read, just didn't love the characters

maryisabelle's review against another edition

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not a fan of grooming

windflowerss's review against another edition

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emotional fast-paced

3.5

It was enjoyable but it started to drag near the middle of the book and it was a bit of a struggle to get through but I loved it never the less 

celineong's review against another edition

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4.0

mumbles fave daddy book so far i can't stop thinking about it please no one perceive me

miabdour's review against another edition

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5.0



Hot, very, very Hot
Steamy, sexy, racy, risqué, erotic

Ok, I'll stop.
But really.

We have the headmaster bending over his student over his desk, with the administrator a door away... dare I say more?

The MC's burnt bright. Chemistry off-the-charts.

I even enjoyed the plot, tying in recent events to fiction is very cool. I'm sure everyone remembers last year around this time when actresses, business leaders and other wealthy parents were charged for college entry fraud!

It did feel just a tad bit shaky tying the MC's with such a big incident that involves interactions with cops and so forth. It could have used more development for the sake of believability... but honestly I didn't care. It was an interesting addition to the very sex-driven storyline and added to the much needed cooling off period.

If you're looking for a well written story with some bdsm, age gap, student-teacher(headmaster) dynamic, inappropriate relationships pushing on your morality.... you've come to the right place. 4.5 Stars, rounding to 5 stars.

tess91's review against another edition

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emotional hopeful sad fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes

5.0